afar_32 2008-4-12 22:05
英语六级作文万能~~（新东方）
[size=5][font=宋体][/font][/size]写作原则
内容简单化
结构模式化（主题句-分论点-总结）
语言要包装
错误要回避
万能理由 (Omnipotence)：
1、方便：convenient/convenience
2、效率：efficient/efficiently/efficiency
3、节省和浪费：save time/money/space; economical, thrift
waste time/money/space; costly, lavish
4：人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive,
considerate, confident, creative, sociable,
perseverance; selfish, isolated, conservative
5、人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic
6、娱乐：colorful, pleasure, joy, recreation, entertainment, relax
tired, boring, lonely
7、环境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty
8、安全和危险：safe, danger, risk
9：经验：experience, social experience, enter the society
10、人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely
基本表达(Basic Elements of English Writing)：
越来越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of
人们认为：it is generally/widely believed/held/agreed that
许多问题：a host of/a number of problems
引起人们注意：claim call/attract general/public/world attention to sth.
意识到：there is a growing awareness/realization of/that, awaken sb. to the fact/danger
适应新的形势/变化：adapt/adjust/accommodate oneself to new environment/change
接触各种思想/经历：be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems
接触社会：come into frequent/close contact with the world/society
获得成功：achieve/accomplish success
提出观点/建议：advance / put forward / come up with the arguments/ideas/suggestions
作出努力：make tremendous/persistent/sustained effort to do sth., take great pains to do(with work/study)
影响学习/工作：interfere with studies/work
产生影响：have/exert a profound influence on life/personality, have a dramatic/undesirable effect on
较好地驾驭生活：be a better pilot of one's life
剥夺机会/权力：deprive oneself of the chance/right/opportunity
取代就的方式：substitute for/take the place of the old way
采取措施：take effective steps/measures to
控制我们的环境：take/gain increasing control over our own environment
躲避危险/挑战：shy/run away from the dangers/challenge
满足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of
补偿损失：compensate for/make up for the loss/damage
解释某现象：account for/explain the phenomenon
对……很好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective on. provide/gain an insight into
把某因素考虑进去：take sth. Into account(consideration), give much thought to
品位人生/自由/青春：savor the life/freedom/youth
培养对……的信心：develop/foster one's interest/confidence in
经历变化/困难/艰险：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience
表现出自信心等：project one's confidence/feeling/image
生活充满不公正的地方：life is full of minor irritation/injustice
追求学习/职业：pursue one's academic interest/professional career
学习知识/技术：pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill
被看作学习的……榜样：be held up as a good example
交流经验/知识：share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge
发挥/起到重要作用：play an (important/active/great) role/part
逃学/缺课：skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture
知识/经验丰富：rich in knowledge/experience
确立/追求目标：set/pursue a goal/higher standard
到达目标：achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/objective
克服困难：overcome obstacles/difficulty
面临危险/困难：be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty
阻碍了成功：stand in the way of success, be an obstacle/barrier to success/growth
阻碍了发展：hamper/impede/stunt the development of
持传统的看法：hold conventional wisdom
发表看法：voice/express one's opinion
持相反/合理的观点：take the opposite/fresh view
揭穿某种一贯的说法：shatter the myth of
求得帮助：enlist one's support/help
缩小差别：bridge/narrow/fill the gap/gulf (between city and country)
把成功/错误归咎于：attribute/own the success/failure to
对……重要：be indispensable/important/vital to
施加压力：put/exert a academic pressure on
重视：assign/attach much importance/significance to
强调：place/put much emphasis/stress/value on
把注意力集中在：focus/concentrate one's attention/efforts/thoughts upon
提供机会/信息：provide/offer/furnish an opportunity/information for sb.
抓住机会：grab/seize/take the opportunity
得到机会：enjoy/gain access to a opportunity/information
有可能：there is (little/much) possibility/likelihood that, chances/the odds are that
展开竞争：compete against/with sb. for the prize/position/control/the mastery of
开展运动：conduct(carryon/undertake/initiate/launch/wage) a (vigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising) campaign (for/against)
对我很有/没有什么意义：make much/little sense to me
带来无穷的幸福/满足：be a source of happiness satisfaction/contentment/pride/complaint
献身于：devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause/career
大不（没什么）两样：make much(little/no) difference
真正重要的是：what really matters/accounts is …
改变生活旅程：change/alter the course of life
建立在大量的学习/实践上：built on tremendous amount of study/practice
进行调查/执行任务：conduct/carry out an study/task/experiment
辞去工作/学习：leave/quit one's job/work/school
参加考试/竞赛等：enter (for) the examination/contest, race
参加活动/讨论：take part/participate/be engaged in sports/activities/discussion
影响思想/态度/事件的形成：shape one's thinking/attitude
进入大学/社会/家庭/劳力市场/职业：enter a school/college/society/the work force/professionals
实现自己的理想/愿望：realize/fulfill/achieve one's dream(hops/wish/desire)
减轻压力/紧张：reduce/alleviate/relieve the stress/pressure/tension
提高社会地位：enhance/improve/upgrade social status/position/standing rise to the position of leadership
提高技术/能力：sharpen (increase/improve/enhance/boost) one's skill/ability
加快/促进发展：accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boost the development of
随着生活节奏的加快：with the quickening pace/rhythm/tempo of modern life/society
开阔眼界/兴趣：broaden one's interest/outlook, expand(broaden/enlarge) one's mental horizons
有助于了解/发展/宣传/解决：contribute much/little/greatly/to a better understanding of/the popularity of/the growth of/the solution of
有助于解决问题：go a long way to(towards) solving the problem
迷恋名利/分数：be obsessed/preoccupied with grades/fame/fortune
把时间花/浪费在：spend/waste time doing sth., put in hours doing sth.
利用机会/技术：make (full/better) use of/take advantage of opportunity/time, tap/harness technology potential/skills/talent
把知识/经验运用到…：apply/put the theory/knowledge/experience… to practice/daily life/good use
取得进步：make much progress/strides/gains in
充分发挥潜力/能力：develop one's ability/potential to the full, give full play to one's ability
充满激情/渴望：have a burning desire/a great passion for
典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：
（启）Paragraph I：（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点；
（2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。
（承）Paragraph II：（1）提出一种观点或优点；
（2）本段的支持性分论点；
（3）本段总结（可以省略）。
（转）Paragraph III：（1）承上启下的过渡句；
（2）提出另一种观点或缺点；
（3）本段的支持性分论点
（4）本段总（可以省略）。
（合）Paragraph IV：（1）平衡两种看法；
（2）给出自己的观点。
一、原 因 结 果
例：There are probably +[many\several\three]+[resons\causes]+ for this +[dramatic\marked]+[increase\decline\change]+ in...
二、比 较 对 照
例：[There is no doubt that\Obviously,]+ it has [its\both]+[drawbacks\disadvantages\negative effects]+[as well as\and]+[merits\advantages\positive effects]...
三、例 证
例：We may +[cite\quote\mention\take\point out]+[a single\a common\another]+ example of...
四、事 实
例：No one can +[deny\doubt\ignor\overlook]+ the +[bare\hard\essential\profound]+ fact that...
五、数 据 调 查
例：A +[recent\new\nationwide]+[study\survey\poll\investigation]+[conducted\taken]+[at a factory\by officials]...
六、权 威（专 家）
例：As one +[scientist\writer\doctor\psychologist]+[wrote\commented\pointed out\noted], ...
七、分 析
例：It seems +[quite\almost]+[(un)likely\(im)possible\(in)credible\(in)conceivable]+ that...
谚语格言题文章逻辑结构 ：
Paragraph I:（1）点明要阐释的谚语或名言(general)；
（2）用自己的话解释这一谚语或名言的意思，有时有正反两面的逻辑(specific)。
Paragraph II: （1）作者对该谚语或名言的观点态度，即文章的论点句；
（2）支持性的细节分论点，举例子论证（至少两点，有时有正反两面的逻辑）；
（3）本段总结（可以省略）。
Paragraph III: （1）总结全文，定下结论（通常为阐明其现实或更深远意义）。
An English proverb says,
One of the great men once remarked, "Haste Makes Waste".
Nearly every civilization has its own equivalent to the proverb:
It means that
……
In other words,
History/Our society abounds with the examples of "Haste Makes Waste". ……. On the other hand/On the contrary, …….
For us college students, the saying/proverb has a profound and realistic significance: …….
.
图表题文章写作逻辑结构：
Paragraph I:（1）描述图表：趋势描写；
（2）描述图表：必要数据支持（细节性）。
Paragraph II:（1）提出自己理由和观点；
（2）细节性分论点（支持自己观点）。
Paragraph III:（1）预测未来和提出解决方法；
（2）总结全文和表达作者自己观点。
The prevalence of brain drain has been a big problem in our society. Almost every day in newspapers carry articles pertaining to brain drain . Although measures have been implemented to deal with this problem, it still remains a serious threat.
A multitude of factors, both individual and social contribute to brain drain. For one thing, a large of scientists and technicians have swarmed into developed countries for favorable living and working conditions which are essential to research and work. Sophisticated equipment also makes it easier to gain academia achievement. For another, a great many top universities in developed countries offer higher rewards and greater opportunities which contribute to their success in career.
There are several ways to address this problem. Rules and regulations should be implemented to control. At the same time, people with outstanding academic perfoming should be educated to gain their willness of coming back. With tough laws and an educated public, brain drain will become a thing of the past.
mlihr 2008-4-16 18:45
补充个
越来越 become more and more ...
为什么什么做贡献 make a contribution to (这个词我不知道文中有没有 想到了 顺便发下)
jeane_qing 2008-4-21 11:48
哈哈,原来是这个意思,谢谢分享!
