The night is calm,
The sea is full.
Nothing can be more beautiful
Than ur song, Like a psalm,
Into my forlorn heart.
So sweet it is indeed!
The night outside is dark,
But here how our living proceed!
Donne claimed nowhere,
Could I find a lady true and fair.
But with u at my heart,
What else should I care!
oh, my fair lady
whenever my heart tolls
it tolls for thee

[ 本贴由 lovecat2000 于 2002-11-23 02:22 PM 最后编辑 ]

Wo.....romantic poem.....

hehe

where is ur poem?i know u can write it well,c'mon,show me!

right here waiting.....

Via the colourful light,
I saw your life.
Thee beautiful eyes without happiness.
I wondered why....
You gave me a sigh.

Wind, Rain and the languorous crow.
My tears come down
I asked why...
You told me your beautiful lie.

My heart goes down.
You do me wrong.

---------LittleBoy
11/25/02

[ 本贴由 小男孩 于 2002-11-25 12:34 AM 最后编辑 ]

90 bow 90 bow

so creative ~~~~
and the essay is so beautiful ~~~~
going on....
i like it so much

and tell me in whisper,how could u find so many feelings about love since u've not found the gal as what u told me b4?

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i also think that there is some mistakes in my sentence,but hard to find it out,could u help me?or u can modify it for me,thx
should it be:
and tell me in whisper,how could u get so many feelings about love since u didn't find a gal as what u've told me b4?

?

[ 本贴由 lovecat2000 于 2002-11-27 12:49 AM 最后编辑 ]

btw,where to find both the lyric and mp3 files of BOB DYLAN?

i serached for it,for got nothing in hand

thx

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i also think that there is some mistakes in my sentence,but hard to find it out,could u help me?or u can modify it for me,thx
should it be:
btw,where could i find both the lyric and mp3 files of BOB DYLAN?
i searched for it,but got nothing in hand

hehe~~
this mistake is obviously

[ 本贴由 lovecat2000 于 2002-11-27 12:51 AM 最后编辑 ]

提醒： 有人在帖子中犯了语法错误，请改正。：）

hehe,i hv modified my post yet
but dunno whether it is right
would u help me?

i only can write sth in chinese in order to express my feeling about love,live or whatever.

hv a look here:
http://www.sharecenter.net/viewthread.php?tid=15282
http://www.sharecenter.net/viewthread.php?tid=15506

引用:

zack0510 于 2002-11-27 11:33 PM 写道：
Aha, Who can translate my poem in English?
骑鹿走崎路，崎路载骑鹿。骑鹿怨崎路，骑鹿误歧路。

FT~~~~

i hv to say that i CAN'T~~~~

555~~~

NB
你们怎么都这么牛！

envy